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X-Men: The Apartment
Author: jaeangel
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(Added on Jan 8, 2005)
(This month 13223 readers) (Total 22749 readers) |
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There has been some interest over on the discussion Forums about my fanfics, so I put this up. This story combines both of my interests, the X-Men (mostly Wolverine and Jubilee) and BDSM, probably not in a way that would occur to many. Read, and enjoy! And any reviews will be muchly appreciated! |
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| Reviewer:
THE Traveller
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Sep 5, 2005 |
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Great story. One of the best FanFics I've ever read. Original setting and concept. Nice descriptions.
I hope there'll be a sequel or continuation in the future.
One of my favorite characters is Emma ( the White Queen ). She looks like a real domina, indeed. Actually I've always wondered what would it look like to have the inner circle of the original Hellfire Club, immersed in bdsm activities.
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Dngnkeeper
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Feb 1, 2005 |
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Even those of us who don't hang out in the X-Men world can appreciate this one. Enjoyed it alot. Can;t wait for more. (8/10)
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smartass kitten
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Jan 11, 2005 |
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I lovelovelove it!!! *grin*
More is definitely in order!!!
Now why did I change my screenname from Wolverine to this again? ;-)
Sorry, no constructive criticism here...I just love it :) (9/10)
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Dododecapod
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Jan 10, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable. Jean as the little innocent I can certainly see.
Maybe a little tighter editing..?
As for my suggestions, well, I've always liked Kitty Pryde, maybe a little F/F with her... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2005)
- Tjhank you! Yes, i didn't realize until it went up how many spelling errors were in it. I'll fix those errors and repost at some future time.
Kitty Pryde. Mmm. I have a few ideas about her, too, look for those. There are ten chapters to this story already written, and more to come (with so many people living in the mansion, the combinations and possibilities are endless!) so look for more soon!
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Dododecapod
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2005)
- Mm, episode II was sweeeet. Jubilee and Logan; fairly obvious, but hot. Might be interesting to see what you'll do with Kurt (although, maybe he's too much of a straight..?)
Looking forward to next episode!
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GaryWilcox
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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Not going to review it or criticize it, but I do have a suggestion. You used some comments... 'don't lie to a telepath'... and it's that kind of thinking that could explain why Jean would submit to this kind of thing from her husband and the two women who want to take him away the most. They are all telepaths who enjoy getitng in other people's heads and playing mind games, and they're competitive too. Consider that the next time the situation comes up...
Personally, I'd like to see something with Sunspot and Psyche... or Cannonball and Wolfsbane... or Cypher and Betsy, post-New Mutants Annual 2, pre-Extinction Agenda...
Boy, I just outed myself, big time! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2005)
- You are reviewing! Suggest away. And yes, I'll think about that...I have at least one more chapter involving the one-eyed philanderer and his women planned. I've actually been absent from the X-men's universe for a while, so i never read the X-Tinction agenda story arc. Most of the names you mentioned I haven't got the faintest idea about. I have chapters involving Remy, Rogue, Logan, Jubilee, Hank, Bobby, Ororo, Warren, and Betsy (yes, i know she's dead in current continuity, but this story was just begging to be told, and somehow Paige didn't seem right). If you have any other pairings you'd like to see involving the X-Men I'm familiar with, email me! And no, you didn't 'out' yourself, I knew you were 'interested' in the X-Men, which is why I posted this! I will be changing the story descripter on the next update and dedicate it to you! Many thanks!
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