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His Pet
Author: briannajade6916
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(Added on Jan 11, 2005)
(This month 9126 readers) (Total 17969 readers) |
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An evening at home with her loving Master. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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Hot story, quite a turn on to see such a loving master "torture" his pet with pleasure.
The style is different - told in first person as if the pet was speaking directly to her master.
It's a harder style for me personally to enjoy, because I'd rather read about "he" instead of "you". As the reader, I am not him.
If this was written for him, well done.
If it was written for the rest of us, then a simple change it style can bump this to a 9/10. (8/10)
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