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Our Fun With Little Crystal
Author: sodepraved
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(Added on Jan 24, 2005)
(This month 23273 readers) (Total 65882 readers) |
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The depraved acts of a husband and his hot perverted wife upon an innocent little girl. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Cennys
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Mar 30, 2010 |
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like it, want the next part BAD (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
maxorchid
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Dec 21, 2009 |
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I'd love to read some more of this story, the next chapter (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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The writing mechanics are much better than
the actual contents. Color me excessively
squeamish, but I really don't care for the
senseless and simple-minded torture of
underage innocents -- especially by such
one-dimensional characters as these. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterXM
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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I loved this story. I even registered just to give you encouragement to write more of it. I always check for updates to this story whenever I visit the site.
The content was great, but since it's only the first chapter so far, the story is only starting to get to the best part. I look forward to seeing more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Feb 1, 2005 |
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A New name on the BDSM Library site I wonder if
if this is the first attempt at writing a story
of this type?
Well I enjoyed it and looking forward to more
from Sodeprved.
One final word when it comes to very heavy erotic
non-consenting literature the lady authors I think mostly write it better.
For one example read two stories posted on this site by author... SUSAN CARLSON... (6/10)
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- Replied by:
sodepraved
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2005)
- Thanks for reading my story and giving me a review. I'm glad you liked it and yes, it was my first attempt. I agree 100% about the female authors. I'm a huge fan of Susan Carlson, I think she's the best!
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 27, 2005 |
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Based on the guidelines of this site, I am a bit surprised to see this posted here. The plot is not very original, there is little if any development and their motivation for this cruel act doesn't ring true. The writing style is good and it is generally well edited, which allows the reader to concentrate on the story without being distracted. However these gargantuan paragraphs could have benefited from a little more disciplined editing. For the record, my rating eschews the word "enjoyable". (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Jan 25, 2005 |
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Solid writing, sexy, and very true to your handle... (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sodepraved
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2005)
- Thanks for the praise. It was my goal to write something many others out there would also find sexy and appealing. I'll get the second part on as soon as I can.
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| Reviewer:
bi cruel perv
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Jan 24, 2005 |
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It certainly made me want to keep on reading I was hopng for some more detail of their activities with her more comments and feelings as they worked on her. Hope you develop ,ore stories for this couple (7/10)
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- Replied by:
sodepraved
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2005)
- Thanks alot for the review. I will try and put more detail into the second part. Take care
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