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The Tip
Author: Not My Story
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(Added on Jan 29, 2005)
(This month 16922 readers) (Total 32431 readers) |
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A harmless comment to her 6 year old son and Amber will never be the same. She ordered the Pizza and planned for a quiet night at home but things don't always go as we plan. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jan 30, 2005 |
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Good: The plot, premise, opening, and end.
IMO - Needs some work: This reads like a seond draft. More detail could have focused on each new twist in the story as its own chapter. Lots of detail in the start of the story turns into next to no detail towards the finish. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 29, 2005 |
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Very Hot, hope there is more (9/10)
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