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The Wedding
Author: Michael Alexander
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(Added on Feb 18, 2005)
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Bethany Steinman and her three friends, all deeply in the lifestyle, celebrate Bethany's wedding to her master Alan. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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a very fun and intertaining story (9/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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A wonderful romp. Great fun. (10/10)
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steve_submits
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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An excellent story, well-plotted and well written. The characters, especially that of Beth/Bethany, are very believable. I enjoyed the slow build-up to the unexpected but very creative preparations of the bride and bridesmaids for the wedding ceremony. The ceremony itself, with its focus on Bethany and her vague awareness of what was happening around her, was especially well done and quite realistic. The wonderful descriptions of the delicous torment the girls endured from the continuous, low-level stimulation of the egg vobrators were a big-time turn-on and have made me determined to present my Lady with one as a belated birthday gift.
This is the first story of yours I have read, and I very much appreciate the romantic but very erotic approach you have taken--far more appealing to me than some of the rather brutal torments described in other BDSM writings. My only quibble is, as Ruby previously pointed out, using two names for the main character resulted in some confusion until the reader realizes they are used interchangeably for the same character. (10/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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this story seemed lacking in excitement to me--rather ho-hum. And shouldn't the Master have fastened his slaves cuffs on her during their vows? (5/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2005)
- Dear bisarah,
I'm understandably disappointed by the low rating you've given my story "The Wedding." However, I understand that one can not please all of the people all of the time. What would be most helpful though is the exact reasons you disliked the story. How can one improve without understanding the critical issues? You have reviewed a number of my other stories, giving me high marks for both, which makes me wonder if your objections to "The Wedding" were content based rather than grammarical, or even based upon the technique used to tell the story. In any event, I will be posting the third chapter shortly. Hopefully it will be more pleasant to you.
Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
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bracemaiden
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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Very well written. I wish I had the same mastery of the english language as you do. However, the whippings for no apparent reason were mystifying. (9/10)
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longrover
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Feb 24, 2005 |
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A fine, romantic tale based on an unusual plot. (10/10)
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michaelalexande
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2005)
- I agree the plot has been unusal. I got the idea by seeing a wonderful pencil drawing of a bride to be being impaled with a bottle of champagne. I loved the idea and wondered what a BDSM wedding might be like. Thank you for your words of appreciation.
Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander
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La Toya
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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Now this is my kind of Wedding. To bad uncle fucked up sam, will not allow same sex weddings (10/10)
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LordVetinari
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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Excellent and well told story. Not as heavy on the torture as I normally like, but granting the premise of the organisation's existence, full of verismilitude. I look forward to the sequel. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2005)
- Dear Vetinari, I am a little confused by your rating of 8. Especially when compared to the other rating that this story has received. I admit that wanting perfect 10s is a little vain, but I can promise you that your lust for torture will be satisfied in the next two chapters. As for the verisimiltude of the story, I appreciate the compliment. I will expect a revision of your rating upon the next installment. :D
Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander
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Breannefun
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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I've always been a romantic fool and this story played to that. I almost cried cause I usually do at weddings. Well done with vivid descriptions, likeable characters, and a believable plot. Thanks! (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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Great story, this is the first of your stories I've read and I'll definitely go back and read the earlier ones. The story is well plotted, the characters are vivid and consistent, and sometimes the descriptions get almost lost in minutia but better to be overly descriptive than the opposite. Look forward to the continuation. (10/10)
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littleslut
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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fantastic story (10/10)
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Ruby
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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Slow build up, is worth the read and the tension. The ceremony was just amazing; well crafted, executed with style and a big turn on!
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Note to author for next refresh or chapters: The name Bethany / Beth is used interchangably. It's better to pick one use for all omnnipresent references, then let the characters select the one they prefer when speaking. If the storyteller keeps changing back and forth in the name use, its confusing and almost like there are two characters instead of one. (10/10)
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