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Forty
Author: Some Writer
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(Added on Mar 4, 2005)
(This month 11174 readers) (Total 23771 readers) |
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A short story about a recent divorcee who picks up a guy at a party and takes charge. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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A good story and refreshing to read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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An interesting combination. Curiosity aligned with detachment. A possible new beginning in the protagonist's life and an air of melancholy that seems to lie over the entire episode. Some more descriptive detail, especially of the male character's reactions to what is done to him, would be beneficial. A spot of editing is needed to get rid of the accidentally joined words. Thank you! Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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Shiela is one cold woman, but every bit of it is believable and well written. Thanks. (8/10)
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