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Curious Country Girls
Author: Enclosed Lady
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(Added on Mar 22, 2005)
(This month 14127 readers) (Total 26744 readers) |
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Two country girls get interested in Bondage and Mummification and finally get their chance to play. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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i understand the reason for the interesting spellings, but you could use an editor before submitting the story.
The story itself is an interesting one, i do hope someone comes and frees them in time for a follow-up chapter or two. The person who sets them free could of course be a dom(me)? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
THE Traveller
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May 1, 2005 |
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I've really enjoyed this story. The content being encasement of these inexperienced girls, was what attracted me to this story at the first place.
I loved the descriptive style and the rich detail ( like the oiled up butt- plug and the inclusion of the girl's muffled moans ).
Also the characters of the girls were nicely portrayed.
But I hope there's a continuation or a sequel to this story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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I can see were this story could have gone had it been longer. This story ends, at least to me as a snuff story. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 23, 2005 |
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hard for a story to be both consensual and reluctant, kinda like being kinda pregnant, it is either one way or the other (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Enclosed Lady
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2005)
- I've read plenty stories with consensual and reluctant moments. This is no different, it was written back in 2003, now I've write more improved ones. But thanks for your review. Best Regards, EL.
- Replied by:
Dryhill
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2010)
- i am a taxi driver and though i consent to drunks getting into my cab, i am often reluctant for them to do. i would be consensual for watersports to the right Mistress but it is something i dislike, therefore reluctant.
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 23, 2005 |
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First of all ... you have some odd words and expression in this story. The latex had to be "hitten" and there was no "scaping"? You always need to learn about synomyms such as "waste" vs. "waist."
Was was this a snuff story? Aren't there some issues with being painted with latex? For reason the girl in "Goldfinger" comes to mind.
It could have been a really hot story, but the errors just distracted from it. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Enclosed Lady
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2005)
- Thank you for your review. The reson of my odd words, is simple, as I said on author's profile, English isn't my first language (I don't speak or write 24hours a day). But even so I try. Plus, it was my 2nd story, something I'm not proud of. Even so, thanks for your review. Best Regards. EL.
- Replied by:
bracemaiden
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2005)
- Dying (or any ill effects) from being painted with latex is an urban myth. See http://www.snopes.com/movies/films/goldfing.htm
or watch Mythbusters on the Discovery channel.
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