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Dance Auditions
Author: Mellanie Hewlitt
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(Added on Apr 1, 2005)
(This month 10699 readers) (Total 23837 readers) |
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Young Dance student submits to advances of school principal. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Jun 18, 2008 |
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Very erotic! Good writing style. I don't understand these reviewers that can only jerk off to perfect grammar! (9/10)
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Lascivious
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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She's a 22 year old high school student? Hmmm... (5/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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the general premise so far is real good, waiting to see what direction you go next (7/10)
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bisarah
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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This story might have been good, but it was difficult to say for sure considering all the errors throughout it. Read a good grammar and punctuation book and then retry this one. (4/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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"but graduation is still many months away" You could plan to add to this story, leading up to graduation (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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Decent, but it had an unusual halting style. Is English your first language? (7/10)
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Mad Lews
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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It's a nice little story of youthful innocence and a lecherous old man. I had a little problem with misused words, sign for sigh in the first sentence and "of cause" for "of course". It's a minor distraction in an otherwise entertaining story. (7/10)
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