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Career Change
Author: Long Tall Mary
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(Added on Apr 9, 2005)
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After nearly fifteen years as the premier dominatrix in Central New York Long Tall Mary decides it is time for a career change. Having distinguished herself with her bizarre and sadistic methods she decides to try her hand at the slave trade in partnership with an equally bizarre and sadistic gay ex-cult member. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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Now that I have read someones report...........
There was very few details on what the "slave" looks like. The writer needs to add some more details. (5/10)
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Dododecapod
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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There's no...emotion in this. It's like reading a police report, precisely accurate and stating exactly what happened, but utterly uninvolving.
I'd like it if some sort of emotional intimacy occurred, but even the fight at the end failed to generate any actual interest for me.
More description would help. what the character(s) see, hear, smell, feel; what it FELT like to ram the dildo in.
The only emotion I felt was the main character's annoyances at the law. Which just wasn't enough to sustain my interest. (6/10)
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