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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
carrie
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Very original idea and well written story. It didn't have the "fake" suddenly she's enjoying the rape "orgasm" that so many stories have. I'd definitely recommend it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Might use just a little smoothing here and there, but otherwise a pretty good story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Amazing concept, glad someone finaly did a story like this (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Pagon, Great story, would love to read about the hobos finding the gift left in the hut. I would be nice to read about the daughter and her little ride on the bed post, along with dad finding her. (9/10)
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carrie
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- I agree with La Toya, a flashback of what happened with the daughter and the bedpost is a must! And how did daddy feel finding his daughter? Did she slip? (hope so : ) )
The hobo's should have some fun too! Maybe a few other kinks could work their way in. There are so many ways to humiliate . . .
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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Not a bad story could have used some of the catories already established. The over all concept of the story was good. At first I did not undestand the chat log but that was later explained. (6/10)
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