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While You Were Out
Author: Couture
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(Added on Apr 27, 2005)
(This month 26537 readers) (Total 52757 readers) |
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Tina wakes to find some strange things going on. And the strangest of all is happening inside her very own head. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Martiniman
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Jan 12, 2012 |
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I loved this story! I enjoy these type mc stories of a best friend or roommate, where both are straight & one takes control of the other turning her into her own personal lesbian for her personal enjoyment. This story was hot & received a 10, yet once again I was frustrated with the "because I can" reason at the end. Can we have a little diabolical sexual depth for the reason. The "because I can" reason is so obvious & going more in depth will only heighten the story & make it more erotic. I'll digress & say this...it is a must read & I wish I could find more stories like this that are as well written, with ideas that are as good as Couture has come up with. (10/10)
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Ficklefinger
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Jan 19, 2011 |
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Excellent, love the denial aspect. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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A lot of people write stories just to get their rocks off. Which is good. except when they throw some of those rocks through our window, shattering our hopes on a good story.
Then there's people like Couture, who probably also write stories to get their own rocks moving, but instead of having us duck or board our windows, Couture is able to push our buttons in such a way she has those buttons flocking underneath *her* window, picketing for more.
Thanks to Couture, I found out I have 137 buttons. "While You Were Out" pushed them all. Several times.
Besides wreaking havock betwixt my buttons, the story is expertly written, has characters for which you can only feel affection and the plot is smeared out in a nice, thick layer.
Great writing, again.
JJ (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 22, 2010 |
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i have nothing more to add than has already been said. Oh yes there is please, Please, PLEASE let us have more on these two ...... pretty please .... crawling on knees begging for more story. (9/10)
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bullfinch
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Aug 3, 2008 |
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well written and well described. Erotic scenario. (10/10)
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igachu80
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Oct 16, 2006 |
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Wow, that was an awesome story. I've read some others by you in the past, and they were great too, but I think this one might be the best. I love the way the humiliation plays out. Forced to tell her small bra size by her pinching fingers...hot, and definitely unique. Good job!
And to echo the others...you need to write more of it! Come on, at least a part 2... :) (10/10)
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rhmusic
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Dec 2, 2005 |
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awesome, awesome, awesome! (10/10)
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jbowler65
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May 7, 2005 |
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Once again very well done. There's just enough there to keep you on the edge of your seat. (9/10)
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rce
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May 4, 2005 |
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Well written. My biggest regret was that it was F/f, not M/f. Perhaps the Mistress can introduce a Master further on in the story? (7/10)
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LordVetinari
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May 1, 2005 |
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Intriguing and disturbing. I enjoyed the mystery of it, but hoped for more cruelty, but that is just me. (7/10)
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ms2bused
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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Absolutely supurb as his works always have been! The very utmost! (10/10)
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bracemaiden
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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Not bad! I liked the teasing humiliation and the domination.
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Fargrace
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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I loved it and found it very original in its introduction and innoscense. Good job. (10/10)
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sub_for_you
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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So hot!!! I liked it very much. I was afraid the boys might get her. I'm glad she got back to her roommate to learn her fate and begin serving her. (9/10)
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tomupstateny
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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I loved your story very well written and turned me on a lot can not wait to find out what is going to happen to poor tiny next. Thanks again !! (9/10)
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jackkat
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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Its great to have you writing stories again. You hve always pressed my buttons and this story is no exception. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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yes YOU are back (10/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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Well done. This is one story that should be on going. (8/10)
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DJ Tuk
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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Well written - is there more? (8/10)
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