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Anniversay Present
Author: Lofwyrkp
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(Added on May 11, 2005)
(This month 21388 readers) (Total 51888 readers) |
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A surprising gift to an unfathful wife. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 1, 2007 |
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It was decent. The superglue never really came into play, and I don't get why the locks aren't removable. The sense of finality that you kept repeating didn't seem to be shared by the wife, and honestly wasn't really there. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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A powerful story of control. It's a lovely, thoughtful, well done piece. Surprising in its depth. (9/10)
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crickette
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May 17, 2005 |
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I enjoyed readng, "Anniversary Present". It was very well written. The pace was even and easy to follow. The storyline felt natural, not rushed or atificial. The same point was made, very nicely I might add, without having to bleep every other word. Don't get me wrong, I can make a sailor blush but sometime you just don't need to be hit in the face. Usually it is the women who get mad and get even.....but not this time. :} (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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May 17, 2005 |
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I like the erotic theme and the action, but the writing style lacks zest. I'ld suggest adding more creative words or phrases for the same meaning to spice it up a bit or bring color or depth to the story. (8/10)
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rce
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May 16, 2005 |
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Very well written and a somewhat original idea. I like the fact that it is a story that is complete in one part and does not need to be continued (not that I would mind more parts). The only thing puzzling me was why the locks could never come off. (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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May 14, 2005 |
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Not quite enough heat for me, but very well written and creative. The writer definitely has some talent for describing erotic scenes. (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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May 13, 2005 |
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A great story of love, betrayal and exquisite cruelty. You've covered it all and everyone gets to smile in the end…. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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May 13, 2005 |
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A truly outstanding effort. I loved the pacing and the buildup, not to mention the ending which I thought was top drawer. This is an author who can write and I look forward to more from this talent. (10/10)
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Engineer
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May 11, 2005 |
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Excellent! Love story, erotic action, and strong but decently presented domination. Writing is skillful and sensitive. More of it, please! (10/10)
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mkemse
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May 11, 2005 |
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love it so far (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Yoru
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May 11, 2005 |
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Well written und very enjoyable. Liked the part that the woman isn't denied everything in the end. (9/10)
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