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Pam and the Officer
Author: DionysusMas
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(Added on Jun 7, 2005)
(This month 29310 readers) (Total 62784 readers) |
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Pam is blackmailed by a black cop who wants to teach the white soccer mom a lesson. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Very good. A bit in the same vein as "Sarah's Smile", which is normal as it's from the same writer.
JJ (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Jan 26, 2007 |
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The author should have stopped after the 1st part. TThat was great. Afterwards, well it would be trivial for her to get away from him so that kind of ruins it for me. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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hope there is moew to cum (9/10)
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altair
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Jun 17, 2005 |
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J'espère que vous ne m'en voudrez pas d'écrire en français (!)
Comme je suppose que nous ne sommes qu'au début de cette histoire très prometteuse, je tiens à apporter mes encouragements, d'autant que je n'avais encore jamais lu quelque part la fabuleuse idée des toilettes !
Malgré tout, j'aurais aimé voir développé la semaine au cours de laquelle PAM abandonne toute résistance et comment elle arrive à gérer sa situation avec sa famille
Voilà, j'espère que cela donnera quelques idées.
Encore bravo
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| Reviewer:
Dr.Hass
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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Simply Great. Keep on writing plz. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
feelfree2mailme
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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Please continue.
Really hot story. Esp. the part of the black homeless man.
Add more humiliation.
If u need any ideas, lemme know. (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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Awe inspiering in a nasty sort of way. Youve got a good grip on her emotions and reactions. Him? well no real clue he's just a nasty dude. Might want to develope him a bit. not psycobabble but some motivation. just a thought (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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Their are lots of opportunity to expand this story. I do hope you plan on adding more to this story. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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Not a bad start: lots of potential for fun here. You need to get an editor, however, as there are several spell-checker caused errors here. (Too for to, for example).
Creativity is important: I like the idea of the tits under the toilet seat. Looking forward to more. (7/10)
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carrie
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Jun 8, 2005 |
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I've always loved the black cop stopping the white woman "victim" scenario. But even my perfect fantasy can be ruined by a poorly written story, I'm happy to say that this author did not disappoint. :) It's not just a "rape" story, the author truly has the black cop degrading and humiliating the poor woman and most importantly doesn't go into fantasy having her suddenly orgasm or enjoy the rape.
If I were to make any suggestions it would be for the author to go into even more detail of how degraded and humiliated the woman feels. Being used as a human toilet must be the utmost in humiliation and cause years of psychological damage. But maybe I'm wrong and it could be worse? :O
Looking forward to the continuation! (9/10)
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