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The Breast Test
Author: Aiken
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(Added on Jun 15, 2005)
(This month 33734 readers) (Total 81730 readers) |
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A smart city girl looks into a suspicious ad for part-time actresses. She finds much more than she bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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very well done, everything a goodstory should have in it (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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Excellent writing. An innovative storyline, both compelling and completely plausible.
Eagerly looking forward to the next installment...
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spitman
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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This is a well written, exciting and erotic story and I can't wait to read the continuation. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aiken
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2005)
- Chapter three is in the works now. :)
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| Reviewer:
buellfool
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Dec 10, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed both parts,well written and hoping for some pain in the tits soon.I look forward to the next chapter. (9/10)
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Rabbit1
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Dec 8, 2005 |
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The paragraphing errors were mine it happened in text conversion---it is fixed now ---sorry for the spoiling of a good story --- (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sweep
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Dec 4, 2005 |
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I liked the story and the consensual nature but the lack of paragraphing spoilt it and I just couldn't finist chapter 2 (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Aiken
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2005)
- The moderator's comment, Rabbit1, explains the paragraph problem.
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| Reviewer:
dncarac
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Nov 30, 2005 |
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I love the story line. It would have been more readable with proper paragraphs though. I want more!
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aiken
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2005)
- The moderator's comment, Rabbit1, explains the paragraph problem.
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Tenebrous
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Nov 28, 2005 |
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This is terrific stuff,much more please.
excellent writing and a very different scenario. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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This is a bit on the long-winded side, but it went down smoothly. I particularly liked the plastic bra in the mall bit, and hope that similar items will need to be tried out. Perhaps the effect of wearing a clamshell brace with the bust portion far too tight? This is largely an intro - we'll see how the story progresses. (8/10)
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sunburststrat
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Jun 20, 2005 |
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Fascinating! Very creative, fresh and well written. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jun 19, 2005 |
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An entertaining idea. Based on the author's past work, I have no doubt that it will continue to be well worth reading. (8/10)
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Engineer
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Jun 17, 2005 |
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Well-written, with a really creative idea. Hoping for soon continuation. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
pert
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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Very well written. I can't wait for more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
anguisette
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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This is a spectacular start, with a great premise and very few mistakes (I only found one spelling error that glared out at me, and I'm pretty observant). I can't wait to read more!
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
J.Wadd
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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Good concept and great so far. Can't wait for Chap 2. Hope you have a lot of good ideas. (8/10)
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