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Wild Jack's
Author: Mark James
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(Added on Jun 21, 2005)
(This month 12063 readers) (Total 19628 readers) |
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Cody is a college boy who almost made it out of school. But he made a mistake that cost him everything. He finds himself on the run. Now he's a waiter in Wild Jack's, a bar in the land of the midnight sun where oil workers come to drink cold beer and blow off steam. Around here, pretty boys like Cody earn their tips in the bathroom on their knees. Trent is a man with dark secrets in his past. When he walks into Wild Jack's and sees Cody, he knows he's got to have the boy for himself. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie1391
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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It's short, but that's alright. Unlike the other reviewer the smut worked for me, as I believe this verbal feminization to actually happen in real life depending on circumstances. I love those stories where the sub has to admit to himself that he gets off on his role. Very well written, and unlike many others grammatically correct! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Jun 28, 2005 |
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People who are charmed by very ritualised dialogue and interaction are hereby encouraged to read. No surprises, but the tale works fine. The desired atmosphere is created by means of skilful descriptions. The dark hints scattered here and there about a certain character’s sinister past provide a pinch of plot suspense.
There was one persistent feature that prevented me personally from enjoying this tale in an erotic sense. How can we call this fetish, which unfortunately I don’t share? There is transvestism, transgenderism... this one could be called translinguism. In an erotic story, all the information is conveyed via the text. If a character gets called ‘girl’ often enough, in the reader’s perception that character becomes a girl. For me, the result was that the erotic tension went ‘plop’. As there is no plot beyond the sexual encounter, there was nothing left for me to enjoy. That was my turn-off mechanism though. The text, though somewhat stereotypical, is well-written, so I am rating it under the assumption that it will be fun for readers who share the cross-semantic fetish thingy.
Welcome to the site, thanks for contributing, and please treat us to more of your stories. (8/10)
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