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Training Rebecca
Author: SimplySizzling
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(Added on Jun 21, 2005)
(This month 136573 readers) (Total 302186 readers) |
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She is blackmailed by IRS agent who requires more than her body, much more. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 14, 2009 |
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A classic blackmail story, very well executed, without the usual hastiness to 'slaughter' the lamb. On the contrary, a very well paced build-up adds to the excellence of the tale.
JJ (9/10)
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massivereader
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Excellent! After waiting for years we finally get the continuation of this classic. A timely tale for this period of economic hardship, resulting directly from outright corporate malfeasance and greed. Too bad those mortgage bankers, finance and insurance frauds who considered themselves Masters of the Universe aren't treated like this!
For those of you not familiar with the work, Training Rebecca is a deliciously perverse tale of the domination of an uppity wife, mother and corporate executive caught in the snare of her own perfidity when an independent tax auditor discovers her cheating on her business taxes.
She first offers a bribe, but finds she must give herself instead, which starts her spiral downward into her new role of a submissive fuck toy at his hands, with her being outmanuvered at every juncture. Until she learns from the intensity of her sexual response that she enjoys submission.
Very nicely done story, written mostly from the victims point of view. We get considerable insight into her humiliation and sexual awakening.
My only quibbles are with the continuation. There is a distinct change in plot development and character motivation between the two sections.
For instance: why in the world would Laughton forego the millions in commission or the use of Rebecca for several years as a compliant fuck toy at his beck and call, just to help her marriage? He has done much worse things to the other women he has coerced in the past. For him to suddenly become a "nice guy" to let her fulfill her submissive destiny and retain her husband strains credulity. It is strongly implied in the first chapter that her husband is complicit in the tax evasion scheme, so why can't he just pressure him as part of the blackmail? Why share the goodies?
The earlier parts, the first six chapters, are strongest in character motivation and believability. Some of the later scenes with Maria the maid, especially, go over the top. Why would an illegal immigrant ever risk exposure and arrest for public indecency in a park? All those places are heavily patroled by police to supress muggings. Seems like a minor point, but that kind of thing effects suspension of disbelief.
Aside from those complaints this is an excellent coercion story, with strong plotting, character development, and very hot sex scenes.
I give it five stars!
Rates right up there among the best I have read. (10/10)
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joshjg
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Dec 28, 2008 |
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Love it! Keep the humiliation coming! (9/10)
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Jack Schitt
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Nov 14, 2008 |
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This was great, I can't wait for the next chapter! How in the world is she going to keep all this from her husband? (10/10)
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masterdw
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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I love humiliation (10/10)
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blossom
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Oct 2, 2008 |
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great story, im so looking forward to the next chapters. (10/10)
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texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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This is a well-writtern, tantalizing story, I thouroughly enjoyed it. The charecters and scenarios are believable and highly stimulating. I can't wait to see what happens when her husband comes home! (10/10)
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chromedome11
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Great story. Good humiliation with enough sex to keep us interested. (9/10)
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roguepilot55
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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Brilliantly crafted and totally believeable. Just the right amount of humiliation and control to be deliciously erotic. No mass gan bangs or physical violence. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for part 6. (10/10)
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fishmiester
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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Absolutely loving it. Cant wait to see what depths he will have Rebecca plummit to
Please, please keep the chapters coming (10/10)
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renko
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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I love this story, and the introduction of the maid into the scenario was a nice touch, I assume there's more of that to come. The style is pacy and yet plenty of detail is included. (9/10)
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slutsteph
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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The story "sizzles" with heat and humiliation. i love it and can hardly wait for the next chapter! (10/10)
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MsMadison
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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i just read the first chapter and the story's great. strong use of detail and smart characters. thank you. (9/10)
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lilsubalex
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Aug 25, 2005 |
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Very well written and thought-out. Erotic, intellgent story telling. Rebecca's character is developing well. Good job on the evolving struggle she is experiencing with her submissiveness. It does not happen easily.
I can't wait for more! (10/10)
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Granite_II
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Aug 25, 2005 |
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Great! Keep writing!! 10!!! (10/10)
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PLP21
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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waiting for the next three chapters.... (8/10)
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jenniQ
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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this would have to be one of the best training stroies I have ever read. I loved it. I just hope you are going to continue with Rebecca's training on paper so we can all read it. (10/10)
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chrissy
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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I hope to read more soon (9/10)
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joepro
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Aug 8, 2005 |
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I enjoed this story . I hope to read more (9/10)
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Abe Froman
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Jun 28, 2005 |
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Very nice -- a great read with lots of possibilities -- and written well so I can't wait to read them. (9/10)
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Tania41
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Jun 26, 2005 |
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Well written, easy to follow (7/10)
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BDSgirl
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Jun 23, 2005 |
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all of what they said. more please. i just love those strong Dominant Men who dont explain themselves. just do it girl, or else. very easy to read, good character development without being overly indepth. moving along nicely. (9/10)
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pechho
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Jun 23, 2005 |
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Very good English. Lots of background and sex more between the lines than explicit. Great stuff! Keep going. I'm looking forward how she manages to keep this secret from her husband. (10/10)
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pechho
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2005)
- I wrote the above after part 1 and I would like to confirm it here after part 3. Great stuff! Please don't stop.
Although I would appreciate to read more and more, I'm also curious how you will manage to close the story at some point of time. Will Rebecca finally go to jail? Will her husband ask for a divorce or enjoy the new bitch? :-)#
Thanks for sharing!
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| Reviewer:
tinybean
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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Fantastic start to humiliation and control story! i hope to see more, much much more in the coming weeks. Please continue to let the reader inside the minds of the characters and what motivates them !! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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Great start of a story in the control genre. Good review by Mark. Can't wait for the updates. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2005)
- Excellent paRT II.
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2005)
- Excellent paRT II.
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2005)
- Excellent paRT II.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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i loved it, when will more be posted (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mark James
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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I liked the idea of how much control the "agent" exerts over Rebecca. You did a good job with the story line, considering the fact that the main action takes place in a restaurant. It reads almost like a play because the two characters are so close during the entire story, but yet in a very public place. Nice job creating a sense of intimacy between the two characters, while at the same time revealing Rebecca's feeling of complete exposure. Rebecca going into the men's room is a nice touch. From the look on women's faces when they've walked in on me by accident, I think there's few things more publicly huiliating for a woman than to walk in on a man at a urinal.
The exposure to the waiter Niko gives a lot of clues as to what kind of man the agent is.
I'd like to see more of what's motivating the 'agent'. Besides the fact that he's an SOB, why he's having such a good time? I'd like to see more of what he's feeling and thinking. What does he want with Rebecca?
Overall, nice job. (8/10)
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