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Consuming Carol
Author: EngineX
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(Added on Jun 25, 2005)
(This month 19225 readers) (Total 33873 readers) |
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In today's consumer society there are always imaginative entrepreneurs with ideas for turning a profit on almost any kind of goods or services. Carol is about to find out that for some of these unorthodox businessmen the consumer may become the consumed. The pretty secretary is ideal raw material for their profitable trade and soon she is drawn into the manufacturing process. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 8, 2007 |
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well done, parts needin provmenet, less detail to interviewing more to the basics of the story, but it was a very enjoyable read (7/10)
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rilawild
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Jul 4, 2005 |
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I enjoyed this story. A good short story portraying a nice innocent girl as she falls into slavery. The setup is nice and it's good to see a British story. I've always wondered what goes on behind those 'Private' doors on the underground. (7/10)
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Arcege
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Jun 26, 2005 |
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A great ending, but the overall story was missing some character depth and consistancy. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jun 26, 2005 |
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Good job all about. Your transitions from scene to scene could use a little expansion as the reader can get a bit confused. Nice ending- I'd vote to keep it a short story but that's just me. (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Jun 25, 2005 |
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The preface did a good job of setting the stage for what ensued. There may have been a bit too much detail in the interview, and this reader kept losing his place every time he blinked, due to the lack of spacing between paragraphs. I'm not at all sure that all the spelling was on the up and up, but translating from the British into American can be a trial for all concerned. The ending was top drawer, for this is best left a short story with a mildly frightening closing. I would strongly recommend this study in horror for those not afflicted with slash and rape syndrome. (7/10)
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