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Forever in School
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 7, 2005)
(This month 17650 readers) (Total 32470 readers) |
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A Student, Principal, and Janitor team up to have fun with the local teachers and a mom. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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Well, I see Mr. Pallidan finally used quotation marks - just once, and improperly at that. This guy has some interesting stories in his head, but unfortunately, his writing skills - or rather, lack thereof - cause them to be nearly unreadable when they exit via his fingertips. I'd actually hoped he'd read some of the previous critical reviews and improved, but alas, this guy is still simply a waste of bandwidth. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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will adjust the rating as more chapter are added, if nonoe are i will have to leave it as is (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
willman
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Jul 7, 2005 |
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Like all of Pallidan's stories, decent content but with such poor grammer and spelling as to make it near ureadable. Pallidan needs to get an editor and learn the possessive form of nouns. (5/10)
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