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Secretaries' Punishment
Author: daddiebear50
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(Added on Jul 10, 2005)
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A full service exectutive secretary remenisces as she reports her newly hired neice's theft to her boss. She knows she will be punished as well as her niece for the offense. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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daddiebear, I've read this story several times and forgot to give it a review. I enjoyed the control the boss had over his secretary and the ensuing relationship. The twist ending with the niece was priceless. Please continue with stories that float in your perverted mind. Signed, a perverted fan (8/10)
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oldwino
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Oct 7, 2005 |
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good play on enlaved stealing worker theme. my young sub gf(38) was turned on by story. She read it a secondtime aloud to me sitting in my lap while I played with her. She only does that with stories that reaally turn her on.Will thier be more chapters? Gf loves more forced pb exhib & hul. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
daddiebear50
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2005)
- Lucky you. I'm glad she liked it. I had the intent to continue bck at the office, serving the Board, clinching accounts etc. but somehow I decided the story would become repitious. After a long hiatis, I have started another story which would return to the public exhibition and humiliation theme. The opening chapter is done, I just need to get busy with the rest. Maybe I'll return to the Secretaries at a later date.
Thank you for the review. Hopefully, I can arouse her again.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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Updated: Now we finally start getting the promised punishments. Much better, but it was a bit disconcerting to see the niece's name change from Anne to Amy and back to Anne again.
-- Original review, for continuity.
Good start, but we never got to the featured punishment promised in the synopsis. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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A very hot story but it has a few flaws.
First, the spelling is not perfect but readable.
Second, the woman does not seem to be able to use a computer. On a computer you don't retype something 5 times and corrections are done very quickly.
Apart from that; very, very erotic. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
daddiebear50
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Thank you for the review. I appreciate your comments, esp the spelling one. As you say computers can do it, well I relied on mine. It showed no misspellings. I suspect you mean correctly spelled but misused or spellalike words, I'll try to improve the proofreading. As to the skills question, remember that this was years ago, "New Excell" And lastly, if your boss said to jump up and down five times or hit the road, how many times would you jump? Thanx for the rating, and the heads up on spelling.
db (but you are right about the flaws,dammit.)
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| Reviewer:
tied_tofer
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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I read the first 2 chapters and realy enjoyed them. I am looking forward to more
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
willman
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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the story is stock man in control, woman helpless. It has its moments but jumps about without ever coming to its logical conclusion. the author sets up an upcoming punishment for secretary and neice (opening the door to many erotic scenes) and then never delivers, instead juming to another scene not greatly diofferent fromthe first. Why settle for vanilla when the other flavors are already in the table. (6/10)
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