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Anna's Date
Author: fellatrix
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(Added on Jul 13, 2005)
(This month 53939 readers) (Total 83034 readers) |
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In a future where women are required to be subservient and wear chastity belts, Anna is sent out on a date with a friend of her father's. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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nassim
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May 9, 2011 |
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Hawt! (10/10)
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fellatrix
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Mar 26, 2008 |
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i like this story. Part 1 anyway. Part 2 isn't as good. (10/10)
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Memento
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Mar 26, 2008 |
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Great stuff.... can't wait to read more... and never mind those whining. after all it's fiction (some people just never understand that concept :-) (10/10)
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jdsaunders01
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Mar 9, 2008 |
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A great beginning. Should be further developed and expanded. Has the potential to create an engaging story-universe. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 9, 2006 |
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not bad, an original idea with parts of it so gross it was hard to give a higher rating (6/10)
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delish
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Aug 1, 2005 |
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First of all, this is -fantasy-. This means it's not real, and not likely to be real. Insinuating that this story reflects how the author views women and real-life submission is laughable. 90% of all the erotica/fantasy stories on the internet are unrealistic... that's part of what makes them fantasy. Also, this is far from being the most squick-worthy story on this site. But, I digress. I thought it was well written, enjoyable, and if it was heavy on the humiliation, it was written in a way I personally found erotic. If you're not into humiliation, you probably won't like this story. (8/10)
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rce
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Jul 29, 2005 |
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Actually a rather disgusting story, making me feel more sick than aroused. As redhot33 wrote, there are a lot of things in the story that are not believable, which makes the story worse. (4/10)
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foxeye1
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Jul 29, 2005 |
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Very good. Nice concept and well written. If I were to be pedantic, I would have liked more desription around the devices and actions of Anna, but that is a minor issue.
I can find no other stories by the same writer so if this is a first attempt, very well done.
Thank you for sharing your work. (8/10)
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Satan_Klaus
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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A rather harsh story but well written. I especially liked the first chapter because of the "everyday" feeling of those perverted acts. (8/10)
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Engineer
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Jul 24, 2005 |
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The basic idea is appealing, although not new, but the implementation has many gaps and inconsistencies. The writing is formally very OK, but shows a high degree of inconsideration regarding women as well as public decency and the concept of chastity belts.
(4/10)
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bobanddianne
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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An excellent concept with excellent development of the details and actions experienced.
Well done. (10/10)
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redhot33
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Jul 16, 2005 |
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I am a slave BUT there are many things in here that my Master would NEVER do! I also find that her NOT being able to wipe herself after she had to pee and she got an enema very sick and gross! There is NO way that you can SHAKE yourself dry after an enema. And then he smears pussy juices on her butt crack, which is still dirty from not being able to wipe her ass earlier. Also, him pissing in her asshole and only feeding her scraps while he eats is pretty disgusting.
I do have a Master and I am VERY submissive to Him, but he would NOT do this kind of thing to me and he FORBIDS me to EVER wear a chastity belt. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
jdsaunders01
(Edit) (Mar 10, 2008)
- redhot33, this is a fantasy story set in a fictional future or alternate world. Public behavior should be expected to be very different in the fictional slavery/erotic/humiliation setting. You're correct about the mechanics of "shaking" dry, but the bidet setup addresses that, and any ineffectiveness adds to the humiliation.
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La Toya
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Jul 16, 2005 |
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Good story, but missing details as other reviews have stated. I can see were the story could be expanded to additional chapters (7/10)
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Fetterer
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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Ordinarily, I don't like futuristic stories, but this one is very good. Of course, I like anything where a female wears a c.b. and the nipple clamps 9not described very well) are a nice addition. Good story. Would read more by this authoress. (8/10)
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Winnie
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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Slightly unusual premise and all the better for that. Lots of room for expansion hence looking for more chapters, please. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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Short and bittersweet, but filled with plenty of ideas, most of them very well executed. While on the topic, to be "electrocuted" means to be executed or killed by electricity. On an other matter, fellatio and urination are not very compatible, one skillfully done precludes the other. Besides these trivial observations, I can find no flaws worth mentioning. I will be very interested in seeing if you can come up with another story that matches this one. (8/10)
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SlvTrayner
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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Excellent first chapter to what I hope will be an extended tail of female subjugation and humiliation not to mention service. Excellent touch about the differences between using the toilet between Master and date (new word for slave) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SlvTrayner
(Edit) (Jul 13, 2005)
- of course that should be "tale" not "tail" but perhaps it was a Freudian slip!
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