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My Negro Slave Story
Author: Storyman
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(Added on Jul 20, 2005)
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This story show how some white people used there slaves for their personal use. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Yme
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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Keep at it, needs more indepth. it can go much more with less setting of the mood and more action. The spelling and grammer greatly detract from the story and lessing it in over all impact. (4/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Sep 29, 2005 |
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I think the premise of the story was good however the writing style and grammer were poor. There was many mispelled words and all. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
narjord
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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I like the variation between an OLD female and a young buck...
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ropeburn
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Aug 1, 2005 |
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I have no idea if this story was good or not, the horrible spelling was so distracting that I could not get past the first few paragraphs. Examples:
dog "coller" (should be collar)
"many wiping she received" (did you mean "whipping"?)
"she was dress" (you forget the "ed" at the end)
etc, etc.
Update: Just attempted to read the 2nd installment. I counted FORTY THREE spelling and grammatical errors in the first paragraph alone...stopped reading after that. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
spicym
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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very nice,continue (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jul 25, 2005 |
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A pity there's no zero possible. Even without the terrible spelling and grammar, I couldn't figure it out. (1/10)
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