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Coach Meat
Author: Shaylea
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(Added on Aug 9, 2005)
(This month 11234 readers) (Total 30308 readers) |
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An overnight coach trips turns into a nightmare for a young lawyer when her seat partner decides to take her in hand... |
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| Reviewer:
freeasair
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Aug 15, 2005 |
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written with a good awareness of this girl's fear and fantasy in a very recognisable and well-described context. And the appearance/colour of the guy is all part of the essential elements which make this fantasy ring true. Makes your appendages curl in horrified anticipation and then join the rush for the bus station. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Well done fantasy, literate and easy to get into. ( Wondering why the knife-man had to be black, though. Does it matter?)
Looking forward to the next section of the story. (8/10)
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Rocky
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Emjoyably humiliating. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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i wonder if greyhound rides are ever like rhis (9/10)
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