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Trick or Treat
Author: pr_squared
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(Added on Aug 9, 2005)
(This month 10180 readers) (Total 22228 readers) |
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Margo receives a real surprise. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Nov 2, 2005 |
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Gah! It’s a... sinister... evil... cruel... ‘frustrate the dominant’ ploy!
Without interaction, control, authority, domination simply evaporate. The scenario makes all power void.
Well written text. Very hard on those poor dominantly inclined type readers.
(Alack, where is a specimen whose chain could be yanked and whose subjugation could be observed? Now I just need to decide whether I should go and wallow in self-pity, or ask the author for a story that takes us to a preserve area...) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pr_squared
(Edit) (Nov 2, 2005)
- Thanks for taking a look. It does lack any interaction as the only male in the story is dead.
I have several hunt stories - I wonder if anyone shares my fondness for them
pr_squared
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Interesting snapshot of a world. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
cambridge
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Not erotic, but good Femdom framework and quite funny in addition to being well written. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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This is positively awesome in every way imaginable, from the massive vocabulary to the writing prowess and the trick ending that I did not see coming.Seldom have I experienced so much in such a small amount of writing. This is one not to be missed by those who enjoy a good story told excellently. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Margo gets a suprise, as did this reader, (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bradbott2
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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Just has no such depth to it at all (2/10)
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