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Trick or Treat
Author: pr_squared
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(Added on Aug 9, 2005)
(This month 50562 readers) (Total 62610 readers) |
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Margo receives a real surprise. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Nov 2, 2005 |
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Gah! It�s a... sinister... evil... cruel... �frustrate the dominant� ploy!
Without interaction, control, authority, domination simply evaporate. The scenario makes all power void.
Well written text. Very hard on those poor dominantly inclined type readers.
(Alack, where is a specimen whose chain could be yanked and whose subjugation could be observed? Now I just need to decide whether I should go and wallow in self-pity, or ask the author for a story that takes us to a preserve area...) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pr_squared
(Edit) (Nov 2, 2005)
- Thanks for taking a look. It does lack any interaction as the only male in the story is dead.
I have several hunt stories - I wonder if anyone shares my fondness for them
pr_squared
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Interesting snapshot of a world. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
cambridge
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Not erotic, but good Femdom framework and quite funny in addition to being well written. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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This is positively awesome in every way imaginable, from the massive vocabulary to the writing prowess and the trick ending that I did not see coming.Seldom have I experienced so much in such a small amount of writing. This is one not to be missed by those who enjoy a good story told excellently. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Margo gets a suprise, as did this reader, (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bradbott2
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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Just has no such depth to it at all (2/10)
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