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The Factory
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 24437 readers) (Total 37932 readers) |
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Characters from 'Modern Dairy' start a business with a new business plan |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 26, 2005 |
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I've read all your previous work. I promise you I'm a fan. I'm rooting for you. Please go back to your old style. (5/10)
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kinkiminx
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Some good ideas- but just thought I'd point out that the story is down as M/f when its actually F/f with a bit of F/m! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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The abbreviations of words and the use of < > around what people were thinking is very distracting. Plus, the idea that a little woman could actually subdue all those people is a tad bit unrealistic. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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just average (7/10)
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