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Roadside Prey
Author: Aspererus
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(Added on Aug 26, 2005)
(This month 185862 readers) (Total 300656 readers) |
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A lovely hitchhiker gets picked up, and used in the bush...In ways she can't even imagine and keep her screaming all along. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MephistophelesXI
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Apr 10, 2012 |
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I've been following this story from, oh, probably around 2009. I'm excited for a new installment every time I see it in the current update section. It's definitely in my top 10 favorites on this site. (I've even gotten ideas for scenes from it, both topping and bottoming.) (9/10)
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ramses
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed the woman's screams. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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Nicely written, well told story of the violent type. (7/10)
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laursie
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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A little over the top on the brutality. Got a little redundant. To much brutality and not enough plot. (4/10)
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jip
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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I'm not too much in "unlimited brutalities", but the story is not too bad written. I join the remark of another reader to highlight the view how Maggie feels. In an next part perhaps? (5/10)
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chooky_104
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Mar 3, 2006 |
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Good story, tried and tested plot as well. I'm with some of the others, more description of Maggie is needed, even a take on how you think she would be feeling....
Liked it, looking forward to more. (7/10)
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bigcat
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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Brutal rape not my cup, but well written, powerful within its genre. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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I thought this was a good story ... well written, but this reader needs more info on the female character ... physical details, etc. Your bad man is quite bad and I look forward to seeing how his friends use his new "friend." I just hope they don't kill her! And this is reason number 56077 why not to hitchhike!! (7/10)
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La Toya
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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Good story. I am one of those who likes a little more detail, like what Maggie looks like, whats her build. This way I know in my minds eye what she looks like. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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Asperus, I am not a woman, but I will still review this story, hopefully making a worthwhile comment or two.
First the good: good control of language. The brutality is well communicated and there is a layer of dark humour in there to make things easier to swallow. Also, the lead character is satisfyingly painted bad, depraved and mean. He is a cliche but a well writen, reliable cliche and that's about all I expect porn to do. The focus on the story is on violent rape and I imagine that for ladies with this particular fetish, reading it gives them the time of their life. Good job. (Jeneric's review seems to be confirming this assumption of mine.)
However, I do have some criticism. With the language being this good and the lead character being deep enough (at least for the opening chapter of a longer piece), I was somewhat disappointed with the lack of almost any depth in the other character - the victim. Now, I know this is much harder to do, after all this is a story told in first person, attempting to objectify the female character as much as possible, strip her of personality and turn her into a 'fucktoy' (I believe this is the correct technical term there). But that doesn't mean it can not be done. The way it is, Maggie, at least for me, was the decidedly less interesting part of the equation. She didn't have anything interesting to say and hardly anything interesting to do. Yes, she did have interesting things done to her (well, if you swing that special way, anyway) but I couldn't identify with her suffering most of the time and that's always a failure with rape stories in my book. Yes, I am male but I guess identifying with a victim is what makes rape stories interesting to me. What can I say, I am twisted.
As it is, we get to hear about the situations that the narrator puts her through and his opinion that these situations are humiliating, but I personally didn't get to feel her humiliation. In that sense, I agree with C Lakewood's comment about action-driven narration. I guess this might be just a matter of preferences, to another reader perhaps it's all about the lead character and his viewpoint but still I imagine some more reflection/ analysis of the actual person being actually treated the way Maggie is should make this story better.
But in general, I think the story is well worth continuing and intend to follow it if it does. (7/10)
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C_Lakewood
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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I find stories that are purely action-driven to
be disappointing, regardless of how well they're
written. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jeneric
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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Aspererus,
I have always had rape fantasies, ever since I can remember. I often fantasize about being raped or witnessing someone else being raped. The more brutal, the better. To other women, this may seem ridiculous but hey, that's just how my brain works :)
Your story was absolutely out of this world. It had everything in it that I like to fantasize about. It was brutal yes, but not unrealistic. Your descriptions of her pain and begging...I could see it in my minds eye perfectly.
Can't wait to hear what happens when his friends come over!!! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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i enjoyed reading it very much (7/10)
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