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Pizza Man
Author: JEP
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(Added on Aug 31, 2005)
(This month 34130 readers) (Total 67467 readers) |
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Well the young waitress should have done him like he expected. She didn't! So he did her like she never expected. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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nicely done, well written good story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
niggpig4use
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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Very well written! I think the bald look was a nice touch, even more degrading and humiliating! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time to write a review. I appreciate all comments. The girl in the story is based on someone I knew. She, too, would have been horrified at being bald and on display in such a condition!
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| Reviewer:
jeanne
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Sep 5, 2005 |
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A very good start. Let's have more! I don't like the bald look, but the bald pussy look gets me soo wet on an abused girl! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Sep 5, 2005)
- Thanks for taking time to review. I don't like the bald look either so I thought the character would like it even less!
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| Reviewer:
joepro
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Sep 1, 2005 |
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enyoyed story I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Sep 1, 2005)
- Thanks for taking time to write your review. Just sent in another chapter. Will try to keep them coming. So far (from a biased opinion), I think this will go in some interesting directions.
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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This is less than half a story! (6/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2005)
- I agree with your comment. I always have trouble dividing stories in to chapters that are appropriately long. Hopefully, the chapters to come will be more satisfying.
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Excellent start to this latest story from JEP keeping me very eager for more chapters very soon I hope and only because I have appreciated his other full on erotic stories I'll give him a top rating here and now. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind comments. I will be sending additional chapters as quickly as I can. I have most of them in my head and will put into printed form as quickly as possible.
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