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Cindy's World
Author: Tallus
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(Added on Sep 28, 2005)
(This month 24233 readers) (Total 70240 readers) |
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Teen's father know what women are for. And he's got the temper and the buddies to show them. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Oct 5, 2008 |
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Very enjoyable (chapter 2) (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 21, 2008 |
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the story was enjoyable it did not offer and shock value but it was still enjoyable to read, by shock value i mean it did not contain anything a reader was not expecting to see and that nothing suddendly happened, hope t see more like this from you (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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Only when I consider a story needs a very special mention and precious approval do I personally enter here in the story reviews (Cindy's World)by this author "Tallus" is one of them he has great talent indeed in weaving a hellish erotic story of a fathers extreme abuse of his daughter with a helping hand from his likewise friends even the unfortunate girls mother must obey all commands given.
I sincerely hope there will be more chapters soon and to save her-self more punishment the girls mother is made to be more involved in Cindy's training for the pleasure of the men.
Looking For More........ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
chooky_104
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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Good story. Rough slavery is always a good read. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Oct 7, 2005 |
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This well written effort is nasty ,brutal and just what the doctor ordered for those of us into such things. I look forward to more of Cindy's adventures. (7/10)
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La Toya
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Sep 29, 2005 |
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They story would have been better with some more information, as Carrieanne stated. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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The story itself was written quite well, but a little bit of background info would have been appreciated. But I look forward to reading more. (7/10)
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