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The Seduction and Enslavement of Young, Innocent Eric
Author: oliverc
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(Added on Oct 8, 2005)
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A newly orphaned teen's guardian has a very different plan for her new charge. Helen slowly seduces then subjugates Eric to fulfill her every sexual and domestic whim. |
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| Reviewer:
Helen2007
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Nov 27, 2010 |
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What an excellent and well written story! Please do write more and soon! (10/10)
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douglas858
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Jan 12, 2008 |
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very very good. you are an excellent writer. Please continue the stoty. (10/10)
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adeadeasyone
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Jul 24, 2006 |
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Superb stuff. Delicious (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Blackbird
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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Another grand slam. You are an excellent writer and a master of this kind of fantasy! You did it all perfectly. I would have preferred it if the boy ultimately had free will in her eyes, but her love of the boy chiefly made up for it. I love the emphasis on oral sex, and the light, but wonderfully erotic spanking over the knee and with a hand. The size/strength advantage of the women in your stories versus the sub are a gigantic turn on as well. I hope to see more of your work. Little ever comes around that hits it quite on the head, and yours does. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
topsfrombottom
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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OMG. You SO nearly got a straight-up, no-BS, perfect 10 from me. Your writing was crisp and believable. The way Mistress Helen conceived of Her plan to subjugate this young manimal, and then - almost offhandedly - executed it with cold, self-serving precision, step by step, holding Herself back from diving in when she could have clearly done so, instead, opting to see each 'stage' through to completion and thereby constructing the next layer of this boy's absolute and irreversible submission to Her on a granite-solid foundation. Oh, how i SO wish that EVERY Female had - or would stop and suddenly recognize that they do, indeed, have (and then begin to utilize - Mistress Helen's unflinching sense of rightful, natural and obvious Female ascendancy over us belching, testosterone-addled, butt-scratching male beasts. If they would, well, I hasten to say that every woman would feel like a cherished, revered, beatific worship-worthy Goddess, and every one of us males would feel like a big, vacuuous zilch until we were being lead home at-heel by our new Goddess. Killer writing.
BUT THEN, ALAS, you lost it, and barely missed hitting a tree when you inexplicably, maddeningly and (quite unnecessarily) had her dress this young beast in the clothing of his Superiors. I nearly rolled my eyes and went back to the index in search of other, more non-tranny-silliness fare. I FACT, Had 'CD' appeared in your code, I'd have not even bothered, truthfully. Frilly things belong on GODDESSES, people - NOT on US ugly, hairy, poorly-drawn manimals! YEESH! And a MALE, even a bewigged, depilated, bra-padded, stiletto-perched, Helene-Curtis-Cosmeticized and cock-bound, is STILL A LOWLY beast of burden and servitude. What SHOULD the properly-attired male chattel sport? A dog-collar, wrist-restraints and an ass, back and ribs crisscrossed with strap and/or whip welts; nOT frilly, Feminine outfits of ANY variety.
For me, then, this otherwise PERFECT, stroke-worthy story was like eating a melt-in-your-mouth steak, and then, 3/4 through the heavenly meal, chomping down on a crunching, rubbery, nauseating, finger-sized hunk of wriggling gristle. As I said - I felt like stomping a puppy (and I'M an animal-person, 110%!).
Oh well, great story - up to then. :(
tfb.. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
blackoak
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Oct 11, 2005 |
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This is an excellent fantasy which I would have loved to have lived out in real life if I had my life to live over again. The author writes well and presents the transitions in the story easily. (10/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Well written and the plot is excellent. (8/10)
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shymalesubuk
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Well written and enjoyable story i hope to read more by this author (9/10)
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