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Michio's Idea
Author: delaquoi
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(Added on Oct 12, 2005)
(This month 14720 readers) (Total 38392 readers) |
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Rich, depraved Japanese housewife decides to buy and train a human pet dog. Inspired by Japanese puppygirl tales. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Apr 14, 2015 |
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But where's the rest of the story? Left me wanting for more... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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May 3, 2007 |
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I found just found this story and I wish you add more chapters to it. It was very good. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Anniegal
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Oct 31, 2005 |
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great start.... will look forward to more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
spicym
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Oct 16, 2005 |
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very nice continue...... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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Nice start to what has the makings of an interesting story. I'd like to see where the plot goes from here, and would certainly consider upgrading the rating if it continues to be as good as the beginning was. As Jacen mentioned, a lot of potential. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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Well, the story was a bit short, and really nothing more than an intro. Details are good- your other story really felt like there were very good, often teasing hints of what the characters were thinking, while this one was... clinical. I see a lot of potential (and that's not something I say often!) (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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Lets see were you take it before I raise my rating. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Delaquoi
(Edit) (Oct 15, 2005)
- Not sure how to take this review. Thanks for reading the story. But for me as a (learning) writer the rating is not really the important thing. What would be helpful is if you could give some detail as to where you thought the story fell down, or even suggestions as to how I might pick it up again.
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