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Kindling Kendra
Author: The Chairman
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(Added on Dec 15, 2005)
(This month 20950 readers) (Total 40201 readers) |
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Freshmen at the University of Dolcett vote for the Bonfire Queen, to light the Start of Term Bonfire, in the unique way one would expect from such an institution. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Omega22
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Feb 16, 2012 |
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Seem that most people cont like consensual stuff even if they claim they would not like to hurt anyone, but I just hate nonconsensual torture
fortunately this story is rare exception, but it could be even better is girls were actually enjoying this.
It would be nice to read short description how they all prepare their bodies.
I am disappointed that once again story has too long and boring preamble.
and it repeats same process 4 times in same way for each girl.
also story lacks detailed descriptions of how girls feel.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Dec 23, 2005 |
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I didn't mind the consensual parts of it. Overall I thought it was an OK idea and story, I'm not sure what I would do to improve it.
I'm also not sure if it is "very true to the Dolcett Universe", but I guess that is open to debate.
I'm going to edit this a little since the author asked for a little more detail on why I didn't care for his story.
1) Details.
2) Charaters - You don't do enough to make me care about these girls. Saying one is 18 and blond and the other is 21 and a redhead does not make them "unique" to me. Give them some emotion, flesh them out.
3) I like snuff fiction, but simple torture doesn't do it for me. This seemed to be just killing for the sake of killing.
Finally, I don't want to give the wrong impression. I think you show great potential with this story. These reviews are here to help make better writers of us all. :)
(5/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Dec 22, 2005)
- I'm sorry you didn't care for it, though I, as author, would appreciate more feedback on why you rated it a 5. Anyway, thanks for tsking the time to review it.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Dec 22, 2005 |
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Good story, but more detail would have made it better.
La Toya (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Dec 23, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind words. As for the level of detail, let me say two things: First, that every story has a "right" length, and this felt right to me. Second, U of D is a setting I'd like to return to, so you may see it again.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 22, 2005 |
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The whole Dolcett universe is unusual; this 'university' fits right in. Though it might have been more fun to see the girls forced to burn, that would not have been true to the Dolcett genre.
Personally, I would have enjoyed more detail of the other girls being used at the party, but you can't do that in a short story like this. It is well constructed, and the style keeps you reading right along. Nice story, if not as stimulating as some others. (8/10)
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Mothbrad
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Dec 21, 2005 |
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A nice fun little story, very true to the Dolcett Universe. A little too consensual for my tastes (and obviously completely unrealistic, as per Dolcett), but if you have a spare 3 minutes, a good investment of time. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Dec 22, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind review. I understand that many folks don't care for the consensuality of the Dolcett universe, but I happen to enjoy it. So if this is not your bag, feel free to skip it. I have many hundreds of stories inside me, and will tell them as I get the time, energy, and inclination. Others may be more to your tastes.
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