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The Sarcophagus
Author: JG Leathers
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(Added on Jun 29, 2000)
(This month 185425 readers) (Total 241425 readers) |
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She was sexually tortured and forced to reach orgasm and was bound in the sarcophagus with absolutely no movement allowed. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
seeder21
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May 31, 2016 |
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I enjoyed the detail of her, "adventure". I got lost at times in these details as I tried to picture them but enjoyed it.
Thank you for your story (9/10)
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inicole05
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Jul 3, 2011 |
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I loved this!!! (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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I partly agree with what nastia2268 has said, below. Only, I am of the persuation that the only way to get a grasp of how people think, is analyze one's own thoughts and write those down.
I thought Christine was way too child-like, both in her behaviour as her thoughts.
Story was worth my while tho, and a pleasant deviation from the usual prison fodder.
JJ (8/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Sep 6, 2007 |
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Excellent story! (10/10)
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nastia2268
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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The idea for the story was excellent. The story itself was very intriguing. Very worth reading,I will probably never forget it. I like your writting style and your use of descriptive words.
However, the feelings expressed by the victim were not well thought out. this can be fixed by having a female friend who enjoys writting go through it with you and help you fine tune.
And there were some sloppy spelling errors and missing words. Just put it in Word with both spell checker and grammar checker turned on then read through it one more time slowly. Then this could be published in my humble opinion!
(7/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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my type of story, love your other obe also (10/10)
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bracemaiden
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May 13, 2004 |
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I have to agree with Tatoo Pat and Travis - the frightening mechanical descriptions can be overwhelming. I also take issue with the story codes - a lot of the story is about exteme modification, and that code wasn't checked. (7/10)
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slave_george
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Dec 7, 2003 |
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Another awesome story by this gifted author. Job well done to say the least. I love the detail. Keep up the great job. Hope to read more of his stories in the future. (10/10)
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AndrewBlack
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Nov 19, 2003 |
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This story is superb, one of my favourites. (10/10)
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Kira
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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Just the perfect story, modification elements inside. Great and unique treatments. Best story i have read along for free. (10/10)
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mickni2000
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Jul 14, 2003 |
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I have read this story several times and I just love it each time I read it. It's just the perfect story. (10/10)
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rcb
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Apr 12, 2003 |
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Good premise,well written,if not perhaps a bit long. (9/10)
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veru_skjava
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Dec 28, 2002 |
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YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!
hmmmmm I gave this a ten, must not have double checked, correcting that lil error now! I LOVE this story! (10/10)
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johnsteel
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Oct 17, 2002 |
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probably my all-time favorite -- I wish it were a lot longer!! (10/10)
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elkine
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Oct 5, 2001 |
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Bondage is described very thoroughly and I like it. Maybe it's a bit long at times, but it really adds to the feeling of anticipation. (8/10)
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mikeg2
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Sep 16, 2001 |
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i agree alittle long but nice (8/10)
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Harry |
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Oct 7, 2000 |
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A bit long, but very nice (8/10)
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tattoo pat |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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frightening! (7/10)
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Engineer |
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Sep 8, 2000 |
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Yep, really something for the technician as well as for the lover of really strict bondage and treatment. The story is really something new, besides of the well-worn paths of BDSM writing. One of my favprites. (10/10)
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Bill |
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Jul 1, 2000 |
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Far too long and technical. Could have easily been cut in half. (5/10)
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Travis |
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Jul 1, 2000 |
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Very erotic. However, the techinal/mechanical descriptions are often overwhelming. (7/10)
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