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Slut wish
Author: nom
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(Added on Jan 4, 2006)
(This month 28875 readers) (Total 51685 readers) |
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a future slut\'s dreams. Will add more as I keep on dreaming and doing. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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I shouldn't be liking this story so much but I am. Basically, this is just someone fantacising in writing, rather than producing a real piece of fiction. And yet, it's written so well, it's so easy to read...
I love the little touches of humour, the brighter tone really does wonders to make the nasty stuff go down easier. Also, it is so refreshing to read a story chock full of 'britishness' - another feature that sets it apart from the rest of the tales on this site.
Despite the initial scenes of both arcs so far that demand stronger suspension of belief (but no effort is made to mask the fact that these are just fantasies anyway), the rest of the proceedings are believable and logical. The pace is brisk and I love the attention to detail in some parts that just serves to make a nice read even nicer.
The best thing about the story is the lead character. Not only she reminds me of someone I used to know (which probably accounts for a big part of of why I liked the story in the first place) but she sounds like a person one can sit down at the pub with and have an absolutely smashing time regardless of the erotic vibe or lack thereof. She absolutely loves what she does/ is done to her even though she recognises the abuse and the humiliation and the possible risks, which somehow makes her an unpretentious, living, breathing person rather than just a story-character. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Master Mad Hatter
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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I am hopping this is a fantasy more then reality. you play a dangerous game if it is really what you are doing. but either way i would like to read more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jan 12, 2006 |
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I think you have submission confused with abuse. If this is something you are doing, get some professional help! (4/10)
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bigcat
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Jan 8, 2006 |
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Very hot stuff. Very passionate. Keep at it. You have something going. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 6, 2006 |
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Not sure how to view this story. As a story, per se, it was just OK. In the realm of fantasy, again, just OK. Some of the kink was kind of fresh. Writing was fine. (6/10)
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