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Torturing Cheryl
Author: Georgia Smith
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(Added on Jan 5, 2006)
(This month 8992 readers) (Total 20049 readers) |
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A bored man decids to give his wife a good thrashing (abusive, not BDSM) and from the man\'s perspective. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 9, 2006 |
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This author interests me. She isn't really writing erotica. This is not a jerk-off story. I think one of the points was that the man didn't care even a little what the woman was thinking or feeling. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 8, 2006 |
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you need to work on the contents of a story, do not post just to post, you badly need spell checking or have someone edit your tories for you (5/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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A fair story, not detailed enough to be erotic, however. Some looks into the victim's view would make it better, or at least a little emotion. (5/10)
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