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A slavegirl\'s pain
Author: Rowena
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(Added on Jan 6, 2006)
(This month 84434 readers) (Total 147264 readers) |
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rachel replies to an ad for a sex slave. But it gets completely out of hand as she is utterly dominated by the very cruel Margo and suffers extreme humiliation, pain and sexual slavery. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jan 9, 2006 |
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Too tough, too rough for my tastes. No sensual satisfaction atll for the submissiv.e Found the change of names from Sylvia" to "Margo" disconcerting. Story needs editing, but shows creative, imaginative and some erotic touches. The humiliation scene in the restaurant had promise but it was too over-the-top and there was no erotic tension in the Margo's responses and/or fear. (5/10)
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ms2bused
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Jan 7, 2006 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story! The use of the slavegirl is SO entirely sensual! No errors hardly in typing or context! I came to envy Rachel immensely and could only daydream about a "Margo" coming inot my life! (10/10)
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