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The Blue Stripe Case
Author: Some Writer
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(Added on Jan 11, 2006)
(This month 21620 readers) (Total 35439 readers) |
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A reporter starts getting tip-offs about a series of bondage sex attacks. Will the cases be solved? Will the culprit be caught? And most importantly, will it attract more readers? |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
SunshineDaz
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Feb 24, 2011 |
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I really enjoyed this story and would give it a 10 if it wasn't for the ending, which is a bit abrupt as the other reviews say. Based on the originality of the plot, the flow of the story and the exploration of self-bondage I believe it deserves a higher rating than 6-7-8. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jan 21, 2006 |
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As is, this rates a 7. With an improved ending
(probably requiring at least one more chapter),
it might well be a 9.
It might be nice to include more about Johnson's
character (and reveal something of Blue Stripe's)
-- but the main thing is to fix that flat,
anti-climactic ending. The case is not, in fact,
closed -- merely shelved.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bicyclerepairman
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Jan 18, 2006 |
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This was a story that had a seat edge quality, sadly it was let down by the ending. Perhaps a little more thought and character development would make this a real epic. Thoroughly enjoyed it though. Many thanks (8/10)
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