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A trip
Author: Ecthelion
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(Added on Jan 11, 2006)
(This month 11717 readers) (Total 20399 readers) |
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A sub is prepared for a journey by car |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Found it to be well written and erotic. Present tense wasn't awkward at all to me. Great job, Etch!
JJ (9/10)
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jip
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Feb 28, 2006 |
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Although I m not into this kind of story, I found it well written. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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I was looking for ... something that had a little more of a story. Also, the present tense of writing is awkward here, at best. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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Wonderfully kinky! A thrilling read! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
PleasureSlave
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Jan 28, 2006 |
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Deeply enjoyed this story!Great imagination, very plausible. Intriguing concept! (9/10)
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