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Leroy The Negro lawyer
Author: Rick 1
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(Added on Jan 31, 2006)
(This month 27868 readers) (Total 50264 readers) |
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Young Black man who has a weeking for Southern White woman with Big tits. Please refer to my previous story Reparations accored to MS ANN |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Mar 10, 2006 |
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Your story has potential. I agree with the previous three reviewers on the technical stuff. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 5, 2006 |
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PLEASE PROOF READ IT BEFORE POSTING, AND SPELL CHECK IT, i realize this is one of your first if not your first but do not turn readers off with bad grammar and spelling, you will never get them back (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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Story line is ok - GET YOURSELF A PROOFREADER, the language is labored, simply using a spell checker and not proofing the result gives poor reviews. Sentence structure is my primary bitch. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jordan2000
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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I love the train of thought. Keep the stories coming!!! (8/10)
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