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Author: Lorddare
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(Added on Feb 2, 2006)
(This month 25541 readers) (Total 49063 readers) |
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A series of events over summer vacation, in a neighborhood near you. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
drcatsup
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May 2, 2015 |
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Feels unfinished. Abrupt ending spoiled the story for me.
You are a talented writer; I'd like to read more of your work. Thank you for posting this. (7/10)
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Jorgy444
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Aug 25, 2012 |
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I'm sorry I can't agree with most reviewers. As far
as the storyline goes very good, but you have not
developed the characters. Very little description
of Amy and no description of Mrs. Dalton or (Denton). Has great potential.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
gilgamekk
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Aug 5, 2012 |
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Well written, but needs a little more depth, for the characters and also the situation. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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A good well told story that is spoilt by some spelling errors and a really silly mistake. In the first paragraph you have the older lady called Mrs. Dalton and Mrs. Denton, please remember your creations name (oh by the way this mistake is repeated later on in the story). (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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something different to read for a change,thank you (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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Greatly enjoyed the story, and the development, though the transition from "sensual" to "slutty" seemed a little arbitrary and forced.
Look forward to more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Sexy story. look forward for the rest.... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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This rating is tentative. I may well be revising
it upward as the story continues. I'm glad to
see a new story by the author of "The Taking of
Carol" (which was excellent). (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Hot and steamy. A very sexy story. Hope there's more chapters to this! (8/10)
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