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Isobel, a dark romantic tale
Author: Kostas Lonis
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(Added on Feb 3, 2006)
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Isobel, meets the man that will change her life in more ways than she imagined. (These are the first 5 chapters of the first story I wrote in English a couple of years ago. Actually it\'s the first story I ever wrote, so it\'s more character based instead of sex but I hope you like it and if so I\'ll send the rest) |
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JimmyJump
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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I enjoyed the story. Very much so. But, on the one hand, and while it is very well written, it doesn't really stand out.
Okay, so it's better than average, but in that category, there's several thousands of stories.
Be as it may, considering this is the first story you've written, I must add a point to my praise and tick-off at Nine.
JJ (9/10)
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crickette
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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I attempted to review your story last night but the server had other plans. I want to say I truly enjoyed your story. Except for some grammatical errors and spelling boo-boos it was very well written. Do a little better job proof reading or better yet let someone else proof-read it and you should be fine.
I loved the storyline. I have a soft spot for vampires, esp. those tall, dark and handsome. Add to that that he is a bad guy/good guy and one cannot ask for much more. I also liked the way you let the characters develop naturally. At no time did I feel like I was being forced to accept the storyline. I also thought the story had a little bit for everybody. I hope I am not giving anything away when I say the roses really worked for me ! I look forward to reading your work in the future. (9/10)
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AlbusLupa
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Sep 26, 2006 |
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Loved reading this story really hope to see following chapters. One of these stories that just make you envious of the authors writing skills. (10/10)
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Lord Douche
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Apr 23, 2006 |
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It's not usually my style of story, but I really enjoyed this one! I'd love to read the remainder of it.
LD (10/10)
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nikita
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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I like your story, very romantic, dark, and excellent. Looking forward to reading more chapters. (9/10)
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jip
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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Well usually I 'm not in this type of stories, but this one is really excellent. I enjoyed reading this. (10/10)
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gothika6
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Feb 27, 2006 |
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I loved this story!! I love stories that deal with vampires and sex. If you have any other stories, please post them! I am naturally a goth so that is why I gave this story such a high rating. (10/10)
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mstrssntraning
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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I liked the story very much if there is more I would like to read it. (8/10)
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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Great story. A little slow in the beginning, almost stopped reading, but kept the faith and was captivated. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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isabeau
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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this story was very well written and extremely original in its concept. i literally couldnt stop reading it. hope you write more chapters. i fell for Byron as i am sure many readers did also. fantastic story, cant wait to read more.
isabeau (9/10)
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Rmmmj
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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I loved the story! Please, there are more chapters, aren't there? I like the fact that it isn't about sex. The characters are developed and you get to know them. You want to know what happens with them. But, when there is sex, (consensual or non-consensual) it means something to the story. Please post more. I have to know what happens with Isobel and Byron. (9/10)
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motylkar
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Feb 5, 2006 |
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I like it (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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very well done (8/10)
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