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Screaming Darkness
Author: Nikita
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(Added on Feb 13, 2006)
(This month 10619 readers) (Total 20847 readers) |
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One sultry morning on a D/s couple\'s vacation where the bellhop\'s tip is...um...generous. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tessa
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Feb 21, 2007 |
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Great imagery. I felt as if I was standing in the corner of the room, looking on. Thanks for the peek inside the darkness. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 21, 2007)
- Thank you for your feedback, Tessa. Hope to submit more soon.
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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May 14, 2006 |
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Is it good? Hell yes! Predictable? a little, but, so are many stories here. Sultry? Yes. Short? Yes.
Because I want MORE! Because it is a well flavored humiliation and domination tease. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2006)
- Thank you, ma'am. You've added more fuel to my fire.
Nikita
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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Short but very erotic story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2006)
- Thank you jip. I will take your feedback to heart.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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WOW!!! What a story! You did a great job showing the emotions of the girl and her desire to please. It got me damp! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2006)
- Thanks Carrieanne! Your feedback makes me want to write some more. I am happy you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
Primus_Pilus
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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Nikita, You have a great talen for writing and while I've only read one of your stories, I can tell that you do have a spot you can improve on. I will email you with more details. ~Primus (7/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Thank you Primus. I hope you get an opportunity to enjoy the rest of them.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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Lyrically descriptive told with an economy that belies the scope and breadth of the humiliation and submission we are allowed to glimpse
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 22, 2006)
- Your prose poetic and thank you for your generous review.
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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While contents of the story if familiar and well used one, the magic is the telling,
And THAT made this fantasy yarn VERY hot for me.
More of such vignettes please?
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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It's adequate. The plot was aparent from the blurb at the beginning of the story. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 17, 2006)
- Oh dear. Thank you for reading it, bracemaiden.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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A fair short story. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 14, 2006)
- Thank you for reading it La Toya. I'm sorry it was short, too. Alas, it was a fantasy and those only need to BE short for me. *gg
Hope I make up for it with updates to my other stories. I have one ready to post for Under His Thumb. *wink
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Truly a hot story; sounds like a true encounter or a treasured fantasy. Well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 14, 2006)
- Although short, it is a hot fantasy encounter. Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 13, 2006 |
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fair, not great not terrible (6/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 13, 2006)
- Ouch.
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