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Power Girl
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Feb 14, 2006)
(This month 16720 readers) (Total 23631 readers) |
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About a DC Superheroine who had been captured and been given as a slave to a woman who despised her popularity |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Ok, enough of the fantasy stories. They are poorly written and just taking up space. THEY ARE ALL THE SAME!!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Ms Sonya, I hope English is not your primary language; the story is rife with errors. So many, it distracted from the story.
While there is a little plot there, and it is fairly well told, there are many opportunities for improvement. A good editor would do you wonders. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
jip
(Edit) (Feb 16, 2006)
- chksnq19 sorry to say but I've seen in several of yr reviews that you have critics about the English language of the writers. I only wonder how good you would write a story in French or Spanish ....?
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yamesh
(Edit) (Feb 20, 2006)
- jip, I would have to say that chksnq19's criticism is valid. We cannot judge here how well an author is doing learning a language that is not their native one...we can only judge a story in the language it is written.
- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- English is my primary language. I just cut to the chase when I write, that's all. Bet you never wrote a single story in your life.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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ok just not into this type story but always try to read all (6/10)
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