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Crossing the Line
Author: swarmlogic
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(Added on Feb 17, 2006)
(This month 21744 readers) (Total 53360 readers) |
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Karen goes on a vacation in the Suth Pacific, and sees a strange sight in a marketplace. It is a girl fulfilling her true purpose in life! Is this the revelation she was waiting for? |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 16, 2011 |
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SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Doc_Odd
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I like con and semi-con snuff. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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not bad and certainly an enjoyable read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
beckydear88
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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Sounds so familiar. Glad to you are still around. I liked the story. Especially the daughters part. I liked how Karen was seduced by the act as well. (9/10)
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jip
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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Snuff is not really my stuff. However although not really into this I must admit that the description of public masturabtion and sex did turn me on (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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As much as I like snuff stories this one really do much for me. Spelling and grammer errors took me out of the story.
Also just when the tension started to build, the story ended. (4/10)
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Fetterer
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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This may have been the weirdest story I've ever read on the internet. I wouldn't want to read it again, but the author has real skills and should continue to write. (8/10)
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Spitman
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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An interesting idea, suspenseful revelation of the true meaning of the scenario, although some of us might have guessed! I think the psychology was quite well done, and there is potential for further development of this original theme into a longer story. (7/10)
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