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Kelly\'s Birthday Surprise
Author: themaneloco
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(Added on Mar 8, 2006)
(This month 32014 readers) (Total 63538 readers) |
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Kelly\'s friends give her the greatest present of all for her birthday; her own slave girl. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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Enjoyable story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Mar 9, 2006 |
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Absolutely one of the finest and most sensual stories I have read in a long time! It is this one-sided pl;easuring that makes me so envious of the 'used' girls in this type story! The humliation provided, but not specifically detailed, is another wonderful addition! The spelling and all was perfect! The only exotic additon I can think of would be in the enslaving women purposely, and often bringing their subjuects to near orgasm, but never allowing them too thereby causing continual agony and frustration for the ones enslaved!
Hope there is many more stories to follow from this excellent author! (10/10)
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yamesh
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Mar 9, 2006 |
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Nicely written and fun! The only criticism I have is that I would like you to write a longer story. I am giving you a 10, hoping that you pursue a longer tale next time. (10/10)
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