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Slavery of Nina Williams and Sonya Blade
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Mar 11, 2006)
(This month 11983 readers) (Total 23799 readers) |
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About two Blonde assassins who were caught on a trap, after trying to assassinate the Iranian President and as a result, suffer some serious punishments at the hands of the Iranian military |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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the layouts on all your stories are realy bad, they flow poorly and the spacing it terrible (2/10)
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castle2001
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Sonya, Sonya you cannot make up for lack of writing skills with sheer quantity. (1/10)
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Mad Lews
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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What can I say, it needs work, lots of it. You've got the imagination just not the writing skills maybe a tour through the forum writing workshop? (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Coffeecup
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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Well the 1 says enough (1/10)
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