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The White College Cheerleader And The Two Black Girls
Author: Martin
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(Added on Apr 6, 2006)
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Based on a true story from my college* An arrogant white college cheerleader is blackmailed into following all the orders of her rivals on the cheerleading squad, two black cheerleaders |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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redwrangler
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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I loved the premise of the story now please take that wooden backed hairbrush to her cute white ass, like you teased at the end of Chapter 2.
Part three blisters emparted generouly with vigor and revenge, please! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Layout leaves to be desired, as do the writing skills. Story was a nice read tho.
Since there have been UFO's known to land in swimming pools, I'll take this true story for granted.
JJ (8/10)
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routi
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Jun 4, 2006 |
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what about part two? (10/10)
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stratus
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May 5, 2006 |
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This story had me on the edge of my seat and I was very sad to get to the end of the chapter. I'm hoping for chapter 2 very soon. (10/10)
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submiss
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Apr 27, 2006 |
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WOW--This story grabs hold at once. Very well composed. Feeds an active imagination. Can't wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
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jip
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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Good start looking for the remainder. (8/10)
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trainmanretep
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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Very nice start. Even though I prefere Females dominating men, I did like this story and I'm looking forward to future installments. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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Off to a pretty good start. Love to read more (8/10)
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star_catcher77
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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that was pretty good. not perfect of course, a few small un important literary flaws (but if you publish this, those would obviously need to be ironed out), but for a quick read, this was pretty amazing. cant wait for more!
agree with you, ms2bused, that's pretty much the backbone of the story, and it works very well (9/10)
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Blackbird
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Really fantastic stuff! Thank you for the craftmanship you so obviously put into your story. I am looking forward to more! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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exellent so far, hope to see the next chapter real soon (10/10)
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ms2bused
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Excellent story and I loved the racial control reversal! The proud White girl being subjected to total humiliation and abuse by the Black girl was enormously stimulating; at least for me it was! Can hardly wait for the continuation and the addition of the other Black girl who was established earlier to be her nemesis! The possibilities here are unlimited! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
kcthulhu
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2006)
- Thank you for the kind compliments...to get compliments from men is a good feeling...but to get one from a submissive lesbian, oh, that is the very best that I could possibly hope for...thank you...especially after I've saw/read a few of your previous story reviews...and yes, i loved 'blonde's rule, brunettes drule'...the continuation of mine will have a lot of psychological implications, and it is ultimately geared for the submissive mind to read and enjoy...as a matter of fact, chapt 2 may be partially devoted to Jessica's thoughts as she has to endure the first of many degrading punishments......and, what is most deliscious about it is it is in college...where even the littlest thing can have the hugest implications...example, something as simple as 'no bra', ok, no big deal, well add to that a thin white shirt and the orders 'mid-riff always exposed' and it gets better, then add a black girl sitting behind you who will randomly prod you in the back, which means you have to sit up straight in your chair and raise your hand as high as you can and ask a question, drawing the attentin of the whole class and teacher, however the action will also be pulling up the thin white half/shirt and exopsing your..........oh yeah, the story gets better........and yes, the possibilities are virtually endless........ stay in touch............ .
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