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Shipwreck
Author: David l
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(Added on Apr 25, 2006)
(This month 40161 readers) (Total 58495 readers) |
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A beautiful white woman is shipwrecked off the coast of Africa in tne year 1820. She is captured by slavers and sold to be used for horse labor. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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This story is just way to fast, with too many details missing. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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There is no subsistence to this story--no character development or explanations! Perhaps if you fleshed it out, it would be better. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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Seems like the author was in a hurry to write this pitiful account. No development of the protagonist nor any description of how she felt during the whole miserable tale. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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altho it is genenraly not my type story i did enjoy reading it (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
shoeps
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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Good story!But I like it more detailed and may be with more than one slave and perhaps some male slaves for the cruel vixens...
Thank you anyway for your work!
Christian (6/10)
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jip
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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The story could have been more promising if not exagerated. (4/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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This story has a beginning and some interesting middle, but no ending. It has no character development at all.
As with your other tale, this is just a series of scenes, not a story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Darcprince
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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in the words of Simon Cowell...utterly boring
(4/10)
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