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Ding Dong
Author: James Smith
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(Added on Apr 26, 2006)
(This month 26159 readers) (Total 40932 readers) |
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An innocent young model becomes trapped in the house of a mysterious client. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Oct 14, 2008 |
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Even though it seems it won't go on with further chapters, I agree with bmtphoenix...
It starts predictable and ordinary, but develops into something completely original and different.
Keep it up! (7/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Sep 6, 2007 |
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Awesome. Now we just need the story of the chair! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
hollykesten
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May 5, 2006 |
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I liked it, and continually check for an update that has part 2. it was interesting, a new idea, and simple (8/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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Well lets hear about the furnishings (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sheilagirl
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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Very stimulating indeed. I really hope you do brush away that ending and keep "adding on" to your "furnishings." There are lots more of those devilishly clever ways to make a girl work for you. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 27, 2006 |
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A good story kernel; hope you are planning on making it grow into a whole tale. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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it is good so far, based on the ending where you erote the end i do not believe you plan to add more, also i entrust from the story that english is not your first lanuage (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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I liked your story, but you have him seeing the understanding in her eyes AFTER he had blindfolded her. But I hope you continue this...it is good! (7/10)
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