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B.B.O
Author: Flost48
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(Added on Apr 29, 2006)
(This month 29917 readers) (Total 54027 readers) |
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A member of a world wide Domination club acquires and trains a new slave. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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Rating: (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rasputtin
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Feb 16, 2015 |
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very hot story - looking forward to more (10/10)
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Alix
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Mar 26, 2012 |
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Well done , excellent story. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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Only read the first five, six paragraphs and already know this is top rate. A story that starts this good, with the right pace, the right amount of 'real-feel' and a crystal-clear outlined personae in the form of Patricia, in combination with the amount of background detail and the story's premise, cannot go wrong.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2009)
- Slight correction: after Patricia wakes at Gray's place, she's not hungry, while it is well-known that GBH induces the appetite a hundred-fold and lets users eat through the contents of a full fridge in the blink of an eye...
JJ
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| Reviewer:
milly_mooe
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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Loved the story and appreciate how much Mr.Flost knows when it comes to making a woman feel wanted and useful to Men.
The other story 'Hotel' deserves an 11/10 tho' and hope there will oneday be a follow-up of both.
Thankyou Mr.Flost.
Yours faithfully,
milly mooe (10/10)
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masterwhiteman
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Jun 3, 2006 |
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it is nice stuff but it is not according to my tastes cow ,toilet,publichumiliation,torture,lactation despite this. it is a creative story. author works really hard. (5/10)
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USMC4ME
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May 2, 2006 |
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Very good stuff, Loved the writing style, the syntax and descriptive imagery. As a new writer I try to convey a presence in the moment to the reader,- if anyone ever asked me what that meant, I'd refer them to this story. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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Anneya
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May 1, 2006 |
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I loved this. I too hope that there will be more. (9/10)
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La Toya
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May 1, 2006 |
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A very well layed out story, from start to finish. I would love to read more about her training and testing. (10/10)
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castle2001
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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Professional, excellent (10/10)
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chattel69
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable story but it would've been better if the first segment had been broken down into chapters so we had to stop for real life in interupt we could find our place better than having to scan the whole segment. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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hard to get much beeter then this, and it is interesting those sotries rated a 10 compared to those that aren't, if you read both meaninig read a story with a 10+ and those lower then that you see a huge difference inthe storyline, the flow and the authors ability (10/10)
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Good_Grip
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Apr 29, 2006 |
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An excellent story. Very weill written. The emotions of both parties are brought out very well. I'm a big fan of breast play, so I liked it even more. I hope you are going to continue the story. I'd like to see what you plan for her training. I can't believe only one other person has rated this story thus far. Don't be discouraged by the lack of responses. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Apr 29, 2006 |
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A very well written story. I appreciate how you explained everything that was going on with all the characters. Will you continue their story? (10/10)
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