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The Ghost of Duke DeCavern
Author: Kate
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(Added on May 3, 2006)
(This month 9731 readers) (Total 14313 readers) |
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A young girl moves into a haunted house where the previous owner\'s spirit tortures her and keeps her as his slave. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 4, 2006 |
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not bad, but using codes might draw more readers so we know what they story entales (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 4, 2006 |
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A fair start, with possibilities. Sadly, too many sentence fragments and short, choppy sentences make it hard to read.
Looking forward to the next installment! (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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May 4, 2006 |
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Kate, I liked this story. It is something different! I hope you will write the next part soon. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jennjenn
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May 3, 2006 |
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this story has a lot of potential ... interesting beginning ... i would like to see more visualization and more realism in her character ... show me her fear and disbelief. well written though and i look forward to seeing more chapters (6/10)
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