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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 18, 2010 |
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A few to many spelling errors for my liking but then i am picky. This story line has been told many, many times but i like the attention to detail (what she was wearing and her crying, spoiling her make up) this helps make the story seem more realistic. (8/10)
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Kira
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Dec 16, 2006 |
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Thanks for this nice story.
Could it be possible to see an second part of Your story here? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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May 24, 2006 |
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Usually, I don't read through all of Anne Gray's stories, anymore. This is because I find them a bit dry - clinical. However, this tale was not so clinical. It had a solid feel and flow. The story was erotic and rather well told. That's the long way to go about saying that I liked this tale. Unfortunately, there were more technical errors than usual; a few odd sentences and phrasings made me retrace my steps. Also, I would have liked to see the story go on a bit longer, exploring the emotional and physical tortures the girl would be going through. Perhaps a second chapter would be in order? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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May 19, 2006 |
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Good premise and it was unique. You could use an editor to clean up the punctuation and grammar. Keep writing, your work will get better and better. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Mistress M
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Thank you Ms. Gray for alerting me to your reply and I re-read your story a second time. I didn't elaborate on the things I liked about your story. I liked the tone and style, in effect, the expression of what was going on inside the head and actions of the protagonist. I also searched for the 22 stories you published on this site, to see what you've produced in the past, but cannot locate them. Perhaps you can supply a link. I still stand by my original comments, but raised your score by one point. *I stand corrected on the 22 stories. They DO appear.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 15, 2006 |
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A very fine beginning, but slow, slow start. A little too much into the fashion directions about the storyteller's costume. Othewise, certainly up to the standard you have set for your stories. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
ThisGirl
(Edit) (May 16, 2006)
- Sometimes details can be boring and make things drag, but in this case, I really loved it! I loved getting such a clear image in my mind of how she must have looked- and I think she looked great- I think her outfit added to the mood of the story as well the development of the mistress' character.
Just wanted to add my two cents- nothing personal agains chksng19's review.
- Replied by:
Anne Gray
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Thank you ThisGirl for defending that important aspect of my story. I would have done it myself but, despite having 22 stories published here with an average 8.5 rating, as you and Mistress M point out in your own reviews my poor grammar and spelling would obviously not be up to such an onerous task.
Anne
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gideon
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May 15, 2006 |
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Pleasantly credible. Nice, well-thought out details. Sustained tone. Stands on its own - but could lead on to more - not necessarily what happens during the following week, but certainly the eventual fate otf the captive (7/10)
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ThisGirl
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May 15, 2006 |
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Wonderful job again, Ms. Gray :)
From character development to plotline, everything is perfectly balanced- nothing missing, nothing overdone.
As before, your story has beautifully clear descriptions of beautiful bondage.
The story leaves you wanting more, but can stand on its own as well.
I agree with Mistress M regarding editing (I'll volunteer, if you like :) )- in fact, I would have rated a 9 if that part did not need revision. (8/10)
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mkemse
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May 14, 2006 |
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it was a good read but i really wish you had place story codes withit to one into the story (7/10)
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